http://www.nytimes.com/2012/12/16/opinion/sunday/watch-out-below.html?ref=opinion&_r=0
In the article, “Watch Out Below!!!” Maureen Dowd expresses to her
readers that “the cliffhanger” is being overused and is hindering to society.
She uses her diction, figurative language, and incorporated details to do this.
The words used by Dowd help her
to show the reader that cliffhangers are becoming overkill and are disruptive
to society. An example of this is when she refers to the use of the cliffhanger
of the end of the world (particularly the most recent outburst—the Mayan
prediction) as an “attempt” to alter the general state of mind. In calling it
an attempt, Dowd diminishes the logistics of it being the end of the world and
makes the idea of it being true seem trivial and foolish, and since it is so
impossible, the worry that it causes hinders society. Another example of how
Dowd uses her diction is when she says, “There’s a new American trend in hysteria”.
By using the word “trend”, Dowd makes the idea that the world is going to end
seem like it is just a phase—something insignificant that will soon pass. It
also emphasizes the overuse of that particular cliffhanger because it makes it
seem like it happens all the time. By using the word “hysteria”, she makes the
idea seem unrealistic.
Dowd also uses
figurative language to emphasize her idea that cliffhangers are overused and
disruptive. For example she says, “…to
continually whirl the whole American population into a state of apocalyptic
excitement …[is] exhausting”. By referring to it in this way, Dowd makes the end
of the world theory seem to not only be perpetual, but also overkill.
Figurative language is used again when she says, “But the cliff metaphor is so overused it makes me want to walk off one”. By saying that
cliffhangers are used so often she would like to die to be rid of them, it adds
drama and the humor makes the reader feel more involved. In doing this, it
emphasizes her point that they are overused.
Dowd also incorporates specific
details to ensure that her viewpoint towards cliffhangers is prominent and
persuasive. An example of this is when she says, “We
have reached the quivering moment of truth that Jon Stewart calls
“Cliffpocalypsemageddonacaust”. By
including this humorous detail, it diminishes the realism that could have been evident
with the cliffhanger of the end of the world. In doing this while relating it
to the prominence of the theory of an apocalypse in American society, Dowd
shows how this idea hinders society. If everyone is obsessed with the false
idea that the world is about to end, they will be unable to pay attention to
what really matters. Dowd makes use of detail again when she says, “Lincoln
wasn’t cliffy … Lincoln had a goal and pursued it methodically through various
means, some shady. He wasn’t interested in hysteria”. By showing the reader
that Lincoln, a commended and prosperous President, was the opposite of “cliffy”,
she enhances the idea that cliffhangers are hindering to people.
Dowd incorporates strong usage
of diction, figurative language, and detail to emphasize the idea that
cliffhangers are overplayed and straining in today’s society. She does this by
referring to it in ways that make the idea of certain cliffhangers seem
insignificant. From there, she continues to examine the hindering effects that
believing and obsessing over these cliffhangers has on individuals, and the
public as a whole.
This article you chose seems very interesting! One thing that you might be open to do is create a stronger thesis statement. Maybe by adding that diction, language, and details add to a tone that Dowd expresses or something else that you get out of this piece. What do you think? I also think adding more examples of diction in your paragraph would be a good idea. I am still a little unclear of how she exactly creates how cliffhangers are becoming disruptive to society. Maybe adding more examples form the article would make this more clear. Good job, Kelsey!
ReplyDeleteFirst off, I find this type of essay to be very difficult for me to write. My criticisms therefore are in no way demeaning to the essay as you will probably find similar faults in mine as well. I thought the article to be an interesting choice. Dowd adds an interesting perspective on end of the year so called festivities. In terms of the essay, nice job. A bit more of detail might be needed in the second paragraph. These details will add more to the argument and better convince the reader of your arguments. And in general a few more examples would add to the greatness of this essay.
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