“Infidelity, Grandly Staged” by A. O. Scott (http://movies.nytimes.com/2012/11/16/movies/anna-karenina-from-by-joe-wright-with-keira-knightley.html?ref=movies)
In
his review of the film, “Anna Karenina”, A. O. Scott portrays the movie to be a
fantastic depiction of the original novel and an engaging watch. This is done through
his use of diction, detail, and figurative language.
Scott
shows the reader how captivating and well-made the film is through his word
choice. For example in the second paragraph he says, “It is risky and ambitious
enough to count as an act of artistic hubris, and confident enough to triumph
on its own slightly — wonderfully — crazy terms”. By incorporating the words “risky”,
“ambitious”, and “crazy”, Scott introduces the reader to how interesting and engaging
the film is. He also shows that the film is well done by including that the director’s
means were “wonderfully” crazy. Scott’s continued use of diction is also seen in
the fourth paragraph when he refers to the director’s goal as his “brilliant
gamble”. By calling it this, he is further expressing his opinion of the film as
being an enthralling interpretation of the original novel. This is again seen
in the fifth paragraph when Scott describes the performances within the film as
“fresh, energetic and alive”. By using these words, he makes the film seem more
captivating to the audience.
The
details included by Scott in his review also contribute to his portrayal of the
film as being a great interpretation of the book and an engaging movie to
watch. For example, after going into an in-depth description of how the
director’s previous films have been mediocre interpretations of the novels upon
which they were based, Scott says, “Mr. Wright’s “Anna Karenina” is different”
(paragraph 3). By including background on the below-par standards of Wright’s “book
to movie” directing history, the contrast between works gained meaning and
showed the reader how good of a depiction of the novel “Anna Karenina” is.
Scott also used strong figurative language to emphasize
the engaging qualities of the film. For example in the sixth paragraph he says,
“The camera hurtles through the scenery as if in hungry pursuit; the lush
colors of the upholstery and the costumes pulsate with feeling; the music (by
Dario Marianelli) howls and sighs…”. These metaphorical comparisons show the
reader that the mechanics of the film make for an exciting experience. By
saying that the camera “hurtles…in hungry pursuit”, he makes it seem as though
the audience finds themselves to be brought into the story because of it. His
comment on the colors of the costumes as “pulsating” also connects the audience
to the movie by portraying it as if the vibrancy of the colors can actually be
felt. Scott does this again later in the same paragraph when he says, “Mr.
Wright turns a sweeping epic into a frantic and sublime opera”. By comparing
the movie to a “sublime opera”, he portrays it to be a captivating film.
Throughout the review, Scott makes good use of his
diction, detail, and figurative language to express his feelings about the
film. He repeatedly uses his words to show his readers how engaging “Anna Karenina”
is, and how it is a sensational interpretation of the original novel.
Good analysis. I think your thesis could be a little more specific. You simply say he uses "diction, language, and details" to support his view. Every author uses those, include a bit of information about how he uses them. For example you could say metaphors instead of figurative language, it's just a little more specific and doesn't leave the reader wondering what you are going to talk about. Just from your quote though, it seems like the author overdid the metaphors a little bit. "costumes pulsating with feeling" is metaphorical to the point where it really doesn't make sense anymore.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Greg on the thesis -- specify! Not specifying is what made my own theses choppy, and it's important to do so in order to focus your essay.
ReplyDeleteMoving on, I think that your body paragraphs were great. One change I would make, however, is to add the OTHER side of detail. What did the author leave OUT? And how does that make him more persuasive?
In your conclusion, you probably should have expanded a bit more (or at least, that's what I would do). You only address diction in the conclusion (for a specific example), but you cite "diction, detail, and figurative language" as key parts of the paper. Talk about each of these parts in your conclusion (with a brief mention) and then end your conclusion with a sentence that synthesizes the purpose of your essay and how it was achieved.
Your first paragraph is very strong. I liked how you went straight to the point by giving examples of the common diction seen. It was a great transition for your examples. By giving multiple relevant examples, strongly supported your claim. Try changing up each paragraph; it would keep the reader more entertained if they were presented by new formats. One last thing, your last two sentences are kind of awkward. Its a good idea to conclude your thoughts, so adding a couple more sentences would make it perfect!
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